Unity and Cohesion in IELTS Writing – Week 4

An aspect of the last week of teaching in Taiyuan, Shanxi Province , China, has been identifying key a variety sentences structures in a reading passages, and incorporating these into our writing.

One of the most important skills any teacher should process is the ability to get meaning from language that is incomplete or not error free.

A useful tool teachers can give students is ‘error correction’.

Here are some real examples that will help you understand more complex aspects of English.

Using words and grammar for meaning and clarity

By the end of this class you should be able to:

Use strategies to decipher typical mistakes from a variety of First Language users and practice predicting and improving meaning.

Grammar corrections from ‘My Exam with Jonathan’ Course

In conclusion, we will continue to benefits of online learning.

In conclusion, the benefits of online learning will continue.

However, the student can stay at home to learn in internet.

Learners are able to remain at home and continue to access courses via the internet.

They also don’t need catch the bus.

There is no reason to travel as they can study from home.

Using online course can be convenience for student.

Accessing online courses can be more convenient for students.

Part 2

Firstly, making a living would be discussed

Firstly, the opportunity to earn a living will be discussed.

Traditional education means that learners cannot choose so much what they want to study

Traditional education means that learners have less choice in what they are able to study.

People may make bad choice in lifes, for example, to choose bad food may lead to obese and disease.

People often make poor life choices, for example, choosing nutritionally poor food may lead to obesity of diseases.

Working or continue studying after graduated is an argument, and this topic has been discussed by more and more person.

Choosing to work or study after graduation is a decision that had been discussed by more and more people.

People have a great deal to choose at convient stores

There is a great deal of choice at convenience stores.

Another disadvantage of working earlier is that they do not have advantages on academic credentials

A further disadvantage of choosing work over study is that those in employment often lack the academic credentials of those who have continued to study.