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How to correct IELTS Grammar and Vocabulary for Cohesion – 1

By ielts-jonathan.com on 15 June 2022

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1 IELTS Unity and Cohesion – Week 1
1.1 Using words and grammar for meaning and clarity
1.1.1 Grammar corrections from ‘My Exam with Jonathan’ Course
1.1.1.1 Part 2
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IELTS Unity and Cohesion  – Week 1

An aspect of the last week of teaching in Taiyuan, Shanxi Province , China, has been identifying key a variety sentences structures in a reading passages, and incorporating these into our writing.

One of the most important skills any teacher should process is the ability to get meaning from language that is incomplete or not error free.

A useful tool teachers can give students is ‘error correction’.

Here are some real examples that will help you understand more complex aspects of English. 

IELTS Cohesion Complex Sentences

Using  words and grammar for meaning and clarity

By the end of this class you should be able to:

  • Use strategies to decipher typical mistakes from a variety of First Language users and practice predicting and improving meaning.

IELTS ERRORS

Grammar corrections from ‘My Exam with Jonathan’ Course

  • Using computer to study on line become a popular tendency.
  • Using a computer to study online has become popular.
  • This essay to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online learning.
  • This essay will discuss/ discusses the advantages and disadvantages of online learning.
  • Compare with traditional class, student can stay at home to study.
  • Compared with traditional classes, students can remain/stay at home and study.
  • Even through, student gain knowledge at night rather than in the whole day.
  • Students are able to gain/acquire knowledge during the day and even at night.

IELTS MISTAKES

Part 2

  • If the place is not Wifi or internet, students cannot online learning.
  • If there is no access to Wifi or the internet, students cannot access online learning.
  • I would to choose somewhere place which have internet.
  • It is better to choose somewhere that has access to the internet.
  • People will spend lots of money for books.
  • People often spend a large amount of money on books.
  • However, online learning need not to pay the facilities and books.
  • In contrast, online learning does not require the payment for facilities and books.
  • There are many benefits about it include convenience. However, it also have some weakness.
  • There may be many benefits, such as/ including convenience, however there are also some weaknesses.
  • Firstly, online learning is convenient for students who not attend the traditional class.
  • Firstly, for those who cannot attend traditional classes, online learning offers convenience.

Writing for IELTS Complex snetences

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